Oral presentation: Rites of passage

TOPIC	PRESENTATION 10%	EYES CONTACT 10%	STRUCTURE 10%	CONTENT 40%	LENGUAGE 20%	PRONUNCIATION 10%	MARC
Bullet ant glove	8%	5%	7%	35%	10%	5%	70%

I think that is quite good, but is improvable. Pronunciation that I did was not much well and I read too much, without looking to the people. But the content, for me was really good, and had a good structure.